Firefly.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Friday, 02-Jan-2009 3:45:52

Firefly, firefly, my sweet little firefly. Don't give in to the darkness, don't let your light die!
Your a brilliant painting painted on a beautiful canvas of life. Dazzling my world with your everything in sight.
Firefly firefly, don't go away. For without you, I'm blind and am astray.
Angels are beautiful, and so are the seven seas. But nothing's as beautiful as you. You with me.
Firefly firefly, I know you belong. In someone elses heart, but for you I still long.
I long for your sweet radiant song. Your moonlight eyes. Your delicate smile.
So please little firefly, stay with me for a while.
Your gentle kisses of joy, your tickling whind chime voice. You raise hairs on the back of my neck, not out of horror, or of hate or coice. I love you, and I don't know why.
I don't want to lose you my precious little firefly!

Post 2 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Friday, 02-Jan-2009 3:49:25

Awww, it's so pretty-full.
I know what it means, though...
*sigh* Why must everything be complicated?

Post 3 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Sunday, 04-Jan-2009 1:05:28

I really like it. The metaphor is also very nice.

Post 4 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Sunday, 04-Jan-2009 4:58:14

Thanks. *the firefly's the one mentioned above. (Sorry, but couldn't help it.)

Post 5 by midnight sun (you can't catch me, i'm the palobread man) on Sunday, 04-Jan-2009 10:02:46

omg this is amazing and beautiful. just wow

Post 6 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Sunday, 04-Jan-2009 21:01:32

Thanks Lory! Glad you like it.

Post 7 by penguin girl is happy feet (Newborn Zoner) on Tuesday, 06-Jan-2009 22:07:48

I think that is so sweet.